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BSsentials: Raiders of the Lost Ark

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Raiders of the Lost Ark is a truly great film. How many of you remember that it was actually nominated for Best Picture? Well, it was, and I can make a strong case that it should have beaten Chariots of Fire, which took the award home on Oscar night. Raiders is more entertaining than Chariots, it has a better story structure, it’s shot better, and even has a more memorable score. It also has higher stakes, which leads to greater drama and tension. I’m sure that most people think of Raiders of the Lost Ark as an action/adventure popcorn movie, and it certainly is that. But when you take a deeper look, you see a film that has a strong and dramatic story in which the stakes could not be higher, incredibly well developed characters with compelling relationships, and action sequences that propel the story forward.

Why it’s essential

A veritable dream team of film makers came together to create this wonderful film. Long time friends George Lucas and Steven Spielberg had already separately created Star Wars and Jaws to go along with American Graffiti and Close Encounters of the Third Kind, so the two of them were already considered to be among the best of a new generation of film makers. But their secret weapon was Lawrence Kasdan, who wrote an absolutely perfect screenplay. Kasdan had already written the screenplay for The Empire Strikes Back so this would be his second collaboration with Lucas, and many Star Wars aficionados consider Empire to be the strongest film in the entire series. With George Lucas providing the big idea of the Raiders universe, Lawrence Kasdan organizing those ideas into a well-structured screenplay, and Steven Spielberg combining it all into a singular vision, Raiders of the Lost Ark became an iconic cinematic experience. I’m not alone in that thinking, as Raiders of the Lost Ark was ranked at #60 on both AFI’s Top 100 American Films as well as the 10th Anniversary of the list.

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Also, let’s not forget that the character of Indiana Jones is one of the great characters in the history of cinema. Again, I’m not alone in that thinking, as AFI has him ranked as the #2 hero of all time, trailing only Atticus Finch (To Kill a Mockingbird), and ahead of such venerable heroes as James Bond, Rick Blaine (Casablanca) and Rocky Balboa (Rocky). This is also the role that put Harrison Ford into the stratosphere of Hollywood super-stardom. Ford had already made a name for himself as Han Solo in Lucas’ Star Wars films, as well as smaller roles in American Graffiti and Apocalypse Now, but the role of Indiana Jones really showcased Ford’s ability to simultaneously be a leading man and an action hero who could carry a scene with both his wit and his bravado. Indeed, even as Indiana Jones does battle with the Nazis and their henchmen, we feel his vulnerability over his feelings for Marion (Karen Allen) and we’re able to grieve with him when he thinks that she’s been killed. That’s what makes Indiana Jones such an effective character. He is a character with unrivaled depth for an action/adventure film. That depth of character was provided by Kasdan’s writing, brought to the surface with Spielberg’s direction and made real by Ford’s performance. No one in any audience anywhere would have any reasonable expectation of being able to empathize with a hero like Indiana Jones, and yet here we are rooting for him and relating to him as though he were a close and intimate friend.

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One of the things that makes that possible is the relationships that Indiana Jones has with the other people in the film. Even though Raiders of the Lost Ark isn’t a particularly emotional film, there is a lot of emotion in it. That emotion comes from the relationships that Indiana Jones has with the other people, whether its the complicated romantic relationship with Marion, the rivalry with Belloq or the friendship with Sallah, we see that Indy has emotional feelings towards the other characters in the film, and he is in fact our emotional guide for how we should feel about those characters. The relationship with Marion is particularly masterful. I had a screenwriting instructor tell me one time that you should always have a love interest because it gives your hero more to lose. It doesn’t make your movie a love story, but love is a basic emotion that everyone has felt and is an easy way to create empathy for your character. Spielberg masterfully used Marion in that role, as Indy had already lost her before the movie even started, then he loses her two more times over the course of the film. The first time that he loses her is particularly effective because we watch the two of them connecting as they walk through the marketplace. Then, when they’re attacked, a slapstick-esque fight ensues that is just as much about showing personality as it is about action. At the end of the fight, it appears that Marion is killed when a truck explodes, and in the next scene we see Indy coping with his grief by getting drunk in a bar. It’s the most vulnerable that we ever see him, and it allows him to lose the superman shell, if only for that one scene, and allow the audience to empathize with him. It’s also a scene in which we see that he’s ready to commit cold-blooded murder when he threatens Belloq in the bar.  He’s then saved physically by Sallah’s children who interrupt the scene calling Indy out of the bar and then he’s rescued emotionally by Sallah who tells him that his children are the proof that life goes on. The emotional beats of the sequence are clear and concise and the whole sequence is demonstrative of the exceptional story telling that’s going on in this film.

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There are also other great relationships between other characters as well. Belloq’s relationship with Marion helps to humanize him and allows us to see the wit and charm that he has as a character. Just like you don’t what your hero to be 100% good, you don’t want your hero to be 100% bad, and Spielberg and Kasdan once again use Marion to bring out the goodness in Belloq. Yes, he wants the Ark, but he is legitimately concerned when his Nazi allies put Marion in danger. He then seems to save her later on, but she clearly rejects his sexual advances, and we see him more as disappointed than angry.

Speaking of story telling, the story and the story structure within the script are also exceptional. This is another one of those stories that when you really dissect it and take a closer look, you see that it’s actually told in four acts rather than three. There are three distinct points where the plot changes direction and Indy is given a new set of challenges to attain his ultimate goal. This is also another one of those stories that has an excellent and clear Hero’s Journey as laid out in The Writer’s Journey by Christopher Vogler. Every stage of the journey is represented in this script, and this is actually quite a good script to study for any aspiring screenwriter.

Rather than dissecting it through the Hero’s Journey, I specifically want to focus on the Act breaks and why I think that this is really a 4-Act movie. (Actually most movies are really 4-Act movies, but that’s a subject for another blog). If you think of a film as being told in four acts, the structure would appear thusly: Act I is the so-called Ordinary World where we’re introduced to the main character and he, in this case Indiana Jones, receives his call to adventure. The second act is when the hero crosses the threshold into the special world and starts trying to attain whatever goal he was set on in Act I. The stakes are raised at the end of Act II, which sends us into Act III where the hero has to adjust accordingly. Act IV begins with the hero seeming to lose everything, but using what he’s learned over the course of the story to overcome whatever flaw he may have had, or using his new knowledge in a way that helps him overcome his enemies and win the day.

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With that structure in mind, Raiders of the Lost Ark is a perfect example of of telling a story in four acts. Indiana Jones’ Ordinary World is that of a college professor of archeology. We also learn that his life is a mixture of adventure and academia and that he has rivals and mentors, and that he needs to use his brain as much as his muscle. He receives his Call to Adventure when his Mentor Marcus Brody (Denholm Elliott) introduces him to two agents from the Federal Government who give him information that allows him to figure out that the Nazis are close to discovering the Lost Ark of the Covenant, an artifact which the Bible implies will make any army invincible. The plot changes direction when Indy agrees to search for the Ark and find it before the Nazis do. That’s the end of Act I and the beginning of Act II. Act II is all about finding the Ark. He finds his ex lover, Marion in Nepal while looking for her father, Abner, who he believes to have an artifact necessary to find the Ark. Marion tells him that Abner is dead, but he discovers that Marion has the piece. After fighting off their first batch of Nazis, they go to Cairo and meet up with Sallah who can get Indy in to the Nazi camp. Using the artifact he got from Marion, he discovers that Ark, and Sallah recruits some other diggers to excavate it under cover of darkness. If Indy’s goal was to get the Ark, he has now accomplished that, and that signals the end of Act II. Since he has the Ark, the stakes are now raised, and Act III becomes about keeping the Ark out of the hands of the Nazis. A series of adventures and fights go from there until it finally appears that they have the Ark safely on a ship that will transport it to England. That is until the ship is intercepted by a German submarine and the Nazis take the Ark and Marion with them. Indy has now failed in keeping the Nazis from getting their hands on the Ark and that’s the end of Act III, and Act IV now becomes about rescuing Marion and getting the Ark back from the Nazis, which he finally does, only to turn it over to the U.S. government and have it stowed away in some nondescript warehouse. He didn’t get what he wanted, but Marion is still by his side, so he definitely got what he needed. That’s it. Raiders of the Lost Ark as told in four acts.

Finally, the last thing that makes Raiders of the Lost Ark so essential is that it is a highly entertaining film, and that, at the core, is what movie watching is all about. I will say that all of the factors that I mentioned above, as well as many more that I haven’t had time to alliterate combine to make this movie as entertaining as it is. It’s an action movie with a compelling story and deep and relatable characters. It’s a movie that wasn’t made so much as it was crafted. Finally, it’s a movie that not only aspiring screenwriters can learn from, but so can directors, VFX artists and even actors. It might not be a perfect film, but Raiders of the Lost Ark is as close to movie making at its best as you could possibly find.

3-Act Structure in a Scene – Children of Men

Anyone who has followed this blog with any amount of regularity knows that I am an advocate of proper structure in screenplays, especially if you’re an unknown writer who is trying to break into the business with a spec script. Using proper dramatic structure when writing your script actually frees up your creativity by providing the framework on which to hang your story. However, 3-Act structure doesn’t only work in the overall story. You should also strive to write your individual scenes in three acts as well. Every scene should have a beginning, a middle and an end with characters who want and are trying to attain something as well as characters who are trying to stop them. Each scene should start off with life in a somewhat normal state until an inciting incident gets the adventure of the scene started. Somewhere around two-thirds to three-quarters of the way through the scene there should be a moment where the hero of the scene loses everything as it relates to that scene and the third act of the scene prepares us for the next scene, which it should seamlessly slip into.

A great example of such a scene is the car scene from Children of Men.

This scene is famous mostly for the fact that it takes place entirely inside a car and moves from character to character without a cut for more than 4 minutes. If you haven’t seen this scene, please take a moment to check it out here.

This is a dynamic scene in many ways. Clearly the cinematography is amazing and there is a documentary on the special features of the DVD that shows how they accomplished the shot. What I’m more concerned about, though, is the storytelling that drives the scene. In fact this scene is a great example of a great many things, not the least of which is the fact that it looks amazing and the way it’s presented is what you remember about it, but it wouldn’t be nearly as memorable if it wasn’t so dramatic or as well told (and shown) within the context of the overall story. If you’re not familiar with the film, it takes place in the year 2027. No babies have been born for the past 18 years and the world is descending into chaos.

Act 1 of the scene

Former activist Theo Faron (Clive Owen) has been “recruited” by his former wife named Julian (Julianne Moore), who is a leader of the terrorist group called The Fishes, to use his political connections to get transfer papers for a female refugee named Kee. Faron gets the papers, but he’s required to accompany the refugee where ever she goes. The scene starts with Faron asleep in the back seat with Kee and a midwife while Julian rides in the front of the car driven by her associate Luke (Chiwetel Ejiofor). They’re traveling through a wooded area, and things couldn’t be going more smoothly. Kee wakes Faron up and tells him that he was snoring. He denies it, but Julian tells them that he always snores. Faron asks where they are and Luke tells them they’re in Canterberry and they’re close. Faron asks if there’s a hotel nearby, as Julian owes him a sexual favor for acquiring the papers. He then asks Kee if she robbed a train or blew up a building which annoys the midwife. Kee tells Julian that she said Faron was suave, and Julian tells her that he was back in his activist days, and she tells a story about how he used to trick the cops. Julian is in a more playful mood and puts a ping pong ball in her mouth and shows it to Faron. At first he refuses to play, but she spits it out and he catches it in his mouth, much impressing the others in the car. He then spits the ball at her and she catches it in her mouth.  The midwife wants to see them do it again and Julian French kisses the ball back into Faron’s mouth and Faron spits it at Kee. The mood is now easy and fun until…

Act 2 of the scene

At the 1:25 mark the midwife points ahead of them and the camera whips around to the oncoming road as a flaming car hurls out of the woods and blocks the road. Luke slams on the breaks and slams the car into reverse as a mob of people come storming out of the woods and attack the car. People with torches and clubs and rocks pound at the car as the confused and terrified passengers try to make sense of what’s going on. The windshield is smashed as Luke gets the car clear of the people, but a motorcycle joins the chase. The person riding behind the driver pulls out a gun and fires, hitting Julian in the throat. The motorcycle then comes along side the car and Faron shoves open his door so that it hits the motorcycle, causing the driver to lose control and crash the bike. Faron tries to put pressure on Julian’s wound and Luke implores as to her condition and turns the car around, but Julian soon dies. Luke continues driving as…

Act 3 of the scene

At the 2:55 mark the camera again points to the direction of the oncoming road and they’re passed by four police vehicles. They go around the corner and Luke asks if any turned around, but it was impossible to see. Very quickly a cop car appears behind them and the voice of one of the cops can be heard coming through a loudspeaker demanding that they stop the car. Claiming he can’t outrun them, Luke orders everyone to get out their passports as he pulls to the side of the road. The police come up with guns drawn as Luke tries tell them that they’re British citizens and the midwife tries to tell them they were attacked. Luke deliberately opens his door to get out and quickly pulls a hand gun, shooting both cops dead in a split second. Faron gets out of the car demanding to know what Luke is doing and Luke simply tells him to get back in the car. When Faron presses, Luke angrily points his gun at him and shouts at him to get back in the car, which Faron reluctantly does. Luke then gets back in the drivers seat and drives the car away leaving the cops lying dead on the road. and the scene cuts at 4:07.

This scene is broken into 3 roughly equal segments and each plot point changes the direction of story, as well as the direction of the car. Not only that, but there is a steady increase in the levels of tension, action and drama as the scene progresses. In fact there is a partial, yet clear Hero’s Journey in this scene as defined by Christopher Vogler in his book, The Writer’s Journey with Act I of the scene essentially serving as the archetypal Ordinary World in which the characters are simply riding in the car, seemingly without a care in the world. They Cross the First Threshold in to the Special World of the adventure when the burning car lands in front of them, blocking their path, and they find themselves in a fight for survival trying to get away from the marauders. The stakes are raised with the Supreme Ordeal, and that happens almost in the exact middle of the scene (2:07) when Julian is shot. Up to that point of Act 2 they were clearly in danger, but the appearance of the gun brought it to a whole other level. The Road Back begins Act 3 after Julian dies and Luke turns the car around with the Resurrection occurring after Luke kills the police officers. The Return with the Elixir happens as they drive away towards safety, leaving death and chaos behind them.

The wants and needs of the characters change throughout the scene as well. They start out on an important journey, but they have no reason to think that they’re unsafe. Suddenly and unexpectedly they’re thrust in to this dangerous and life-threatening situation where survival becomes their main goal. Finally, when they’re confronted by the police, the goal becomes escape. For reasons we’ll find out later, Luke adamantly does not want to be detained by the police, so much so that he’s willing to commit murder to prevent it. The filmmakers actually gave us the first act to get to know the characters on a more personal level so that we care and are concerned when they appear to be in danger. The simple anecdote that Julian tells about Faron does a lot to humanize both of them and also allows both of them to let their guard down to allow the audience to empathize with them. Without the first minute and a half of this scene being as effective as it is, the final two and a half minutes would not have nearly the tension that they do. It didn’t take a lot of time, but they took enough time to let us into these characters lives before they shattered them. That’s all it took to make us actually care, because the scene will lose most of its effectiveness without any emotional engagement from the audience.

This scene is brilliant on many levels. It was shot and edited in an innovative and creative way, and that’s what drew attention to it. But for me, the strongest aspect of this scene is the brilliance with which Alfonso Cuaron conceived, wrote and directed the shot where every second is more tense than the one that preceded it and the dramatic structure of the scene actually carries the action just as effectively, if not more so, than the amazing cinematography. Any aspiring screenwriter would be wise to study this scene and others like it in order to help inform their own writing.

Monument Script services can analyze individual scenes in your screenplay just as we did with this scene, and we can analyze and provide notes on the structure of your script overall. We pride ourselves on being sticklers for dramatic structure, and we can certainly help you out if your script is wanting in that capacity. Click here to see the different levels of coverage that we can offer.

BSsentials: A Clockwork Orange

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A Clockwork Orange is my personal favorite film and one of the two films that I feel are as close to perfect as films can get. Casablanca is the other, and you can click here to read my thoughts on that film from my Best Picture series. I understand that A Clockwork Orange can be a rather polarizing film, and many people have avoided watching it due to the disturbing nature of its content. This is a violent film that shows graphic depictions of violent beatings and rapes as well as orgies of sex and violence. “Ultra-violence” as it is referred to by Alex, the film’s protagonist played masterfully by Malcolm McDowell, is the driving force behind much of this film, and the main motivating factor behind much of Alex’s behavior over the first two acts. Now I can hear you asking, “What kind of a perverted bastard would list a film with those qualities as his favorite movie?” Well I’ll tell you why right now.

Why it’s essential

If you are a screenwriter, either professional or aspiring, this is a film that you can learn from.

This is a film about humanity in all of its depth. Stanley Kubrick, the film’s director, has often been accused of dehumanizing his characters. His films, his critics argue, are filled with emotionless meat puppets who are cold and un-engaging. I would submit to you that nothing is further from the truth and this film demonstrates that perfectly. A Clockwork Orange has a protagonist in Alex who is a prototypical anti-hero who has more than a character arc; in fact his character does a complete 360 from violent sociopath to redeemed citizen and back to sociopath. All of this happens within the confines of an exceptionally well-structured story and provides a powerful statement on what it takes to be human along with the roles of society and the government in dictating how that humanity is manifested or maligned. All you need to do is watch the scene in which Alex’s parents tell him he can no longer live with them, and you’ll see how emotionally devastated he is.  In fact, the entire second half of this film turns into an emotional meat grinder for Alex, and it’s truly magnificent to watch.

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The story structure for A Clockwork Orange is among the best I’ve ever seen with a nearly perfect Hero’s Journey, especially in the context of its description by Christopher Vogler in his book The Writer’s Journey. The film is actually told in 4 distinct acts. The first act introduces us to Alex in his Ordinary World as a teenager who blows off school and spends his nights looking for “the old ultra-violence and a little bit of the old in-out.” His Call to Adventure happens when two of his “droogs” tell him that there’s going to be a new way in the gang, and they’re going to be more democratic about deciding what they’re going to do and whom they’re going to victimize. The Refusal of the Call shows Alex beat the snot out of his droogs for questioning his leadership.

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However, all of this anti-social behavior finally catches up with Alex, and he’s actually betrayed by his droogs, and the second act begins with Alex Crossing the First Threshold being sent to prison for murder after his latest victim dies. The Tests, Allies and Enemies section is actually spread throughout the first two acts and the Meeting of the Mentor happens in Act 2 after Alex has been in prison for a while and he confesses to the prison chaplain that he wants to be good and that he’s heard of a treatment that can make you be good. The priest tells him that being good is a choice and that he has doubts about the treatment, but Alex moves to the Approach to the Inmost Cave when he volunteers for it anyway and is put into the program.

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The third act and the Supreme Ordeal begins as Alex leaves prison and enters the hospital to receive the Ludovico Technique, which is a drug that he’s given that causes him to become physically ill at the thought of hurting another person. We start to feel sorry for Alex as he’s watching one of the films and the soundtrack is Beethoven, so he’s now afraid that hearing Beethoven will cause him to be sick in the future. The treatment is so effective that Alex cannot physically perform and act of violence without getting physically ill. However, the Reward is passing through the program and achieving what he thinks is his freedom.

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However, Alex’s inability to defend himself manifests itself as Act 4 begins with The Road Back. Alex takes a literal road back to his home only to discover that his parents have rented out his room to a stranger. He’s then confronted by his former victims, and he becomes a defenseless victim of their rage and he finds himself on the opposite end of the beatings that he’d previously been inflicting. In a moment of bitter irony he finds himself in the care of the widower of one of his rape victims, who doesn’t recognize him at first. But once he does recognize him he concocts a plan to have him kill himself so that the government can be blamed for his inhumane treatment. Alex does try to kill himself, but fails in the attempt, and the Resurrection happens when he is nursed back to health. The Return With the Elixir happens when Alex is hired by the government in order to help them avoid the PR hit and we see that he’s going to go back to his sociopathic ways as he tells us through narration, “I was cured all right.”

The structure of this story is brilliant as it is split into four equally important sections that each take the story and the protagonist in different and unexpected directions. Each new direction that the story takes adds a level of depth to the story as well as to Alex as a character. He is presented with new challenges and these challenges build upon the ones that came before them as the story moves along. There are very few scenes in this film that don’t inform other scenes throughout the story. Very little material in this film is self-contained.

The character of Alex is truly one of the great characters in the history of cinema, and I don’t necessarily think I’m being hyperbolic by making that statement. Malcolm McDowell played this character with a sinister wit that I’ve not seen before or since. As the story progresses we see Alex in many different ways. He loves the music of Beethoven, but uses it as inspiration for his violent behavior. He speaks with a sophisticated air to his superiors, but uses a nearly indecipherable slang at all other times. He generally just takes what he wants, but isn’t afraid to manipulate to get what he needs either. As the story moves into the second half we see Alex go from aggressor to victim, from strong to vulnerable. The old Alex is dead in an archetypal way, and is then is resurrected in an archetypal way after his suicide attempt.

At the beginning of the film Alex and his droogs look for victims and care very little about others. Alex believes that they have the freedom to take what they want and go where they choose.  He’s not looking for money or riches. He just really seems to like causing pain in other people. In fact, when Alex is first brought to prison and the Chief Guard asks his crime, there’s more than a hint of pride in Alex’s demeanor when he says, “Murder, sir.” He is a prototypical sociopath. He does seem to gain some sort of empathy for others through his own suffering in the second half of the film, but only because his freedom of choice has been taken away from him, and he largely becomes a pathetic person. Then once he’s off the treatment, and has been “cured”, his free will allows him to seemingly go back to the depraved lifestyle he had before. Does that mean that he’s largely now an unchanged character? Perhaps, but the theme of the film is that our free will is what makes us human beings.

And here is the important point about the violence in A Clockwork Orange. It is not gratuitous. The violence in this film is completely necessary both for the narrative as well as for the message that the film is trying to convey, and it has a message that is deep and powerful. As mentioned above, this is a story about humanity and the moral choices that we make as humans. The film poses many thought provoking questions. Would you give up freedom for the sake of security? Is it morally correct, or perhaps even morally necessary, to take away a person’s free will if that person uses that free will to choose to harm others? But then do they cease to be actual human beings? Do governments have the moral responsibility and/or the right to deprive some citizens of their free will and therefor their humanity if it is determined to be for the greater good? Who is the final arbiter of good and bad? Like many other great films  A Clockwork Orange doesn’t answer the questions that it poses, but rather leaves it up to the audience to think about it and come to their own conclusions.

To me it is the message and the theme of A Clockwork Orange that puts it over the top. This is a film that you have to think about. It’s a film that you have to pay attention to. Sure, any teenage boy is going to be titillated by the sex and violence in it, but there is an important and intellectual message that this film is trying to get across and it takes effort on the part of the view to truly grasp all of the elements that get played out in this film.

Even if you don’t think that this is a perfect film as I do, this is still a film that is worth your time. But don’t just take my word for it. A Clockwork Orange was ranked #46 on AFI’s original top 100 movies of all time list, it has a 90% rating on Rotten Tomatoes, and it was nominated for Best Picture of 1971, losing to It is a film fan’s film, and one that I consider to be essential viewing.

 

A New Series From Monument Scripts

We have a new series that will be starting up in the next couple of days called BSsentials. These will be posts centered around films that I feel are essential viewing. Many of these films will be classics, but many will not be. There will be goofy comedies on the list as well as quirky indie films, entertaining action flicks and some that are all of the above.

One thing I don’t want the list to be is pretentious, so I’m sure that there will be films on the list that surprise some people. Every film that makes the list will be on it for a different reason, and part of the exercise will be explaining what makes a film a BSsential. For those of you who followed the Best Picture blogs, this series will likely follow the same pattern of one film per week.

So keep your eyes peeled for the first BSsential, which should drop some time this week.

Summertime and the Living’s Easy: The 1 Big Reason to Get Screenplay Coverage This Summer

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With the official first day of summer just a week away, I thought it would be a good time to recommend getting professional coverage for your screenplay from a service like Monument Script Services. Having a professional reader evaluate your screenplay is always a good idea. In fact, most professional writers that I know won’t send a script to a producer without first having it read. The coverage that readers provide is an invaluable tool in helping any writer, no matter how seasoned or experienced, the opportunity to fine tune their work by having it evaluated by someone who knows what to look for and who knows how to fix whatever might be wrong.

With that said, there is one big reason why summertime is the best time of year to have your script evaluated.

Everyone else is on vacation.

The summer is a rotten time to submit your script to studios and agencies because so many people are on vacation. That means the best thing to do is to have your screenplay evaluated early in the summer by a professional reader and then spend the rest of the summer improving it based on the reader’s coverage. That way you’ll be ready to submit a better script after Labor Day when most everyone is back at work and ready to look at new material. Anything submitted now is likely to sit for an extended time on a shelf, not getting any better. That goes for writers as well. Not a lot of people submit scripts this time of year, so readers will be able to focus a lot of energy and attention on your script.

If you have a script that you think is ready to submit, a professional reader is bound to find something that can be fixed. Since most readers (like me) have spent time reading for studios and/or production companies, we know what to flag for you to fix in order to avoid getting the dreaded PASS on your studio coverage. Getting polished professional notes from a professional reader now will allow you to set yourself up with the reasonable goal of having your script polished by the end of the summer so that it can be on top of the studio’s or agency’s pile come autumn.

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